@Temi-I liked your summary Try to say your favourite part @Kyle-I liked the way you held up the book Try to smile a bit more @Rebecca-I liked the way you said your favourite part Try not to pause
@Rebecca- I like the way you didn't give away too much,and try to speak louder. :) @Aoife- I like the way you gave a lot of information but not the ending,but I would like to see the cover of the book. :) @Kyle- I like the way you didn't give too much away and try to show more expression. :) Temi.A :)
Well done guys, good comments but maybe you could elaborate on them a little more. Have you enjoyed watching your book reviews back? Have you noticed any changes from December to now? I'd really like to her hear what you think! MsMcG
@Temi-I liked your summary
ReplyDeleteTry to say your favourite part
@Kyle-I liked the way you held up the book
Try to smile a bit more
@Rebecca-I liked the way you said your favourite part
Try not to pause
@Rebecca- I like the way you didn't give away too much,and try to speak louder. :)
ReplyDelete@Aoife- I like the way you gave a lot of information but not the ending,but I would like to see the cover of the book. :)
@Kyle- I like the way you didn't give too much away and try to show more expression. :)
Temi.A :)
rebbeca u said your words well and a wish is smile a bit more from kyle
ReplyDeleteTemi smiled well but maybe use a bit more vocabulary from kyle
ReplyDeleteAoife spoke clearly and maybe smile more
Well done guys, good comments but maybe you could elaborate on them a little more. Have you enjoyed watching your book reviews back? Have you noticed any changes from December to now? I'd really like to her hear what you think!
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I like how you spoke fluently and made eye contact but maybe smile some more @Aoife ~ Rachel
ReplyDeleteI like how you smiled and showed ex
ReplyDeleteI liked how you smiled and showed expression but maybe try to speak more fluently @Temi ~ Rachel
ReplyDeleteI liked how you made eye contact and spoke fluently but maybe smile more @Kyle ~ Rachel
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ReplyDeleteI liked the way you spoke fluently and made eye contact but maybe use facial expressions!
Well done! - Kacey