Teni. I really liked your book review because you can really see you improve from the first book review until now but at the end you stopped after saying bye and then rated it
Laura brilliant job on your Irish book review book review and you have great intonation ,but read from A different author to see what else your are interested in~Teni
Firstly, a big well done to Laura for being brave enough to record her book review in Irish, maith an cailín! Secondly, thank you to all the rest of the group members for the thoughtful comments you left about each others reviews. Have you found doing this helpful? Do you like reading comments about your work in this way? Let me know what you think, thank you! MsMcG
Hi Sean, I think your book review was great because you kept it simple and straight forward.I think you could improve on telling the audience more about the book and if you could show it, bye. Erik
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@laura I think you spoke really clearly and made lots of eye contact but maybe smile a little more! Well done - Kacey
ReplyDelete@sean I think you smiled a lot and made facial expresions really well! well done! - Kacey
ReplyDelete@teni I think you smiled and made eye contact! Well done! - Kacey
ReplyDeleteTeni. I really liked your book review because you can really see you improve from the first book review until now but at the end you stopped after saying bye and then rated it
ReplyDeleteLaura. I thought your book review was so good when you did it in Irish and my mam told me to read an Irish poem until I can speak Irish like yours :D
ReplyDeleteKacey. I think you explained your book really well and made it sound really intresting
ReplyDeleteThanks Seán.I think you have improved greatly
ReplyDeleteThanks @ Kacey you have improved in your intonation and you spoke clearly, but you should try a different genre of books to read~Teni
ReplyDeleteLaura brilliant job on your Irish book review book review and you have great intonation ,but read from A different author to see what else your are interested in~Teni
ReplyDelete@Seán maybe do longer reviews~Teni
ReplyDeleteFirstly, a big well done to Laura for being brave enough to record her book review in Irish, maith an cailín! Secondly, thank you to all the rest of the group members for the thoughtful comments you left about each others reviews. Have you found doing this helpful? Do you like reading comments about your work in this way? Let me know what you think, thank you!
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Great review @Teni just try to describe the book more - Chiamaka
ReplyDelete@laura Good job Laura
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@Sean i liked your book review because you put so much effort into it i think you could of shown the book.
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@Kacey i think your book review was good because you put entusiasim into it but i think you could smile more .
ReplyDeletelaura
@Teni i liked your book review because you put alot of effort into it but i think you could smile the hole time.
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I LOVED how you did your review in Irish and l loved how you spoke soooo fluently but maybe smile a bit more @Laura ~Rachel
ReplyDeleteThanks Laura! I loved the fact that you did yours in Irish!!! Wow! - Kacey 👍
ReplyDelete@Kacey I loved how you said it was like diary of a wimpy kid. Your book review was amazing.
ReplyDeleteEmma
Hi Sean, I think your book review was great because you kept it simple and straight forward.I think you could improve on telling the audience more about the book and if you could show it, bye.
ReplyDeleteErik
Teni I picked you , I taught that your book review was absalotly brilliant AND YOU SHOULD
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Thank you Sam, same to you keep up the amazing work buddy AND YOU SHOULD BE PROUD OF YOUR SELF AS WELL
DeleteThanks Emma!
ReplyDeleteYour book review was brilliant and very fluent! ;)
Well Done! - Kacey
Love your book reviews guys!!!!!! ;))
ReplyDelete~Temi