@Sharon Hi Sharon. I really like your book reviews,they were all very good. I really liked the way that you kept it short and simple. Maybe something to improve on is to say a little bit more information^-^
Hi Sharon,I really enjoyed your book review because you spoke naturally and because you kept a smile.I think you could improve on keeping eye contact and try to not pause as much ;) Erik
@Pablo Hi Pablo. I watched all your book reviews,they were all very good. I really like the way you gave all the main points but not all of them. Maybe something to improve is to not pause that much^-^
@Erik Hi Erik. I watched all your book reviews,they were all very good. I really loved the way that you always show enthusiasm in your videos. Maybe something to improve is to not look away from the camera that much^-^
@Sharon, I watched your review and i thought it was amazing, you also spoke really clearly but i think you can look at the camera a bit more. Other wise the review was amazing keep up the good work :-) Pablo
Hi Wissam, I really enjoyed watching your book review because you kept eye contact and because you spoke clearly.I think you could improve on keeping a smile ;)
@Erik At first I thought your review was the best and i think many could agree, but the one that you posted this month blew that one out of the water, many people would say that you should have put on a smile on but how you said this review I don't think it needed a smile, good job on the work you put in. Pablo
@Wissam I saw the review from December and i could see that you weren't as fluent as you were an the February (March). I loved how you spoke fluently. My only wish is that you smile a bit more, all in all the review was amazing
Excellent feedback guys! There are loads of positive comments there and some very helpful tips being offered too. Keep up the good work! I'm really interested to know how it feels to see your book reviews live on the blog and to get feedback on them from your classmates? Let me know your thoughts! MsMcG
@Rob My star is that you spoke clearly and my wish is that you don't repeat what you said and speak fluently. Other than that your review was amazing, keep up the good work :-)
@Sharon I loved they way you didn't give to much of the book away and you kept calm and paced yourself. I chose to comment your review because I liked your December and January reviews. I also liked that you told your favourite part, you should be proud of your work -Chiamaka
Hi Erik Love your book reviews because you are so pasionate about the books you read One thing you can improve on is to try and be more relaxed and look more into the camera Erika
@Erik i like the way you put alot of enthusiasm into all your videos,i also like the way you smiled through all your videos.Could make more eye contact ;)
@Erik i like the way you put alot of enthusiasm into all your videos,i also like the way you smiled through all your videos.Could make more eye contact ;)
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@Sharon
ReplyDeleteHi Sharon. I really like your book reviews,they were all very good. I really liked the way that you kept it short and simple. Maybe something to improve on is to say a little bit more information^-^
Wissam
Hi Sharon,I really enjoyed your book review because you spoke naturally and because you kept a smile.I think you could improve on keeping eye contact and try to not pause as much ;)
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@Pablo
ReplyDeleteHi Pablo. I watched all your book reviews,they were all very good. I really like the way you gave all the main points but not all of them. Maybe something to improve is to not pause that much^-^
Wissam
@Erik
ReplyDeleteHi Erik. I watched all your book reviews,they were all very good. I really loved the way that you always show enthusiasm in your videos. Maybe something to improve is to not look away from the camera that much^-^
Wissam
Hi Pablo, I really liked your book review because you spoke very clearly and you used good vocabluary. I think you could improve on keeping a smile;)
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DeleteI watched your review and i thought it was amazing, you also spoke really clearly but i think you can look at the camera a bit more. Other wise the review was amazing
keep up the good work :-)
Pablo
Hi Wissam, I really enjoyed watching your book review because you kept eye contact and because you spoke clearly.I think you could improve on keeping a smile ;)
ReplyDelete@Erik
ReplyDeleteAt first I thought your review was the best and i think many could agree, but the one that you posted this month blew that one out of the water, many people would say that you should have put on a smile on but how you said this review I don't think it needed a smile, good job on the work you put in.
Pablo
@Wissam
ReplyDeleteI saw the review from December and i could see that you weren't as fluent as you were an the February (March). I loved how you spoke fluently. My only wish is that you smile a bit more, all in all the review was amazing
Excellent feedback guys! There are loads of positive comments there and some very helpful tips being offered too. Keep up the good work! I'm really interested to know how it feels to see your book reviews live on the blog and to get feedback on them from your classmates? Let me know your thoughts!
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Well done Pablo. I like how you spoke clearly and you used brilliant vocabulary - Chiamaka
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ReplyDeleteMy star is that you spoke clearly and my wish is that you don't repeat what you said and speak fluently. Other than that your review was amazing, keep up the good work :-)
@Erik
ReplyDeleteI like your video. My star is I like the way he said who know's in a deep way and my wish is smile more.
@Pablo
ReplyDeleteMy star is is he didn't stumble on February and my wish is on January he should of said bye
Love all your book reviews!! :)
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@Wissam I really liked your book review because you were so calm. Well done!
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@Sharon I loved they way you didn't give to much of the book away and you kept calm and paced yourself. I chose to comment your review because I liked your December and January reviews. I also liked that you told your favourite part, you should be proud of your work -Chiamaka
ReplyDeleteHi Erik
ReplyDeleteLove your book reviews because you are so pasionate about the books you read
One thing you can improve on is to try and be more relaxed and look more into the camera
Erika
@Erik i like the way you put alot of enthusiasm into all your videos,i also like the way you smiled through all your videos.Could make more eye contact ;)
ReplyDelete@Erik i like the way you put alot of enthusiasm into all your videos,i also like the way you smiled through all your videos.Could make more eye contact ;)
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