I really liked your book review because I have a two dogs and I love them so much and now that you reviewed this book you made me want to read it but I think that you should slow down :) @chloe
@Sam I think that your book review was really good because you were really calm and you spoke at a good pace but I think that you should try to be more fluent :)
@sam I liked it because you were very calm and you gave a good description although i think that you could have smiled and showed a bit more facial expression
Brilliant feedback guys! Remember to explain the reasons behind your 'stars and wishes' so your group mate understands exactly what you mean. I am interested to know if you like seeing your work presented on the blog in this way and how it feels to have your group mates comment on your work? I would love to hear what you think! MsMcG
@Katie Hi Katie.I watched your book reviews, they were really good.I really liked the way that you kept the review short and simple like the book. Maybe something to improve is to not to pause that much in your reviews ;)
@Sam Hi Sam. I watched your book reviews, they were good. I really like the way that you gave the right amount information in your reviews. Maybe something to improve on is to speak a little louder ;)
Hi Chloe, I thought your review was brilliant and very clear. A star would be that you spoke with enthusiasm and a wish would be that maybe make facial expressions when your talking and maybe smile more đ just be yourself! đ Well done - Kacey
Hi, @Ben Star:I think you done a brilliant job because you used good vocabulary Star:You where very fluent Star: You used main points without giving to much away Wish:Keep calm and smile :)
Star:You where fluent Star:You didn't stumble much Star:You gave an important point especially coming up to Easter for getting dog Easter egg's I love <3 dogs Star: Maybe add one more important point : )
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@ben I thought that was great because you used good vocabulary but I think that you should show more expression on your face:)
ReplyDeleteI really liked your book review because I have a two dogs and I love them so much and now that you reviewed this book you made me want to read it but I think that you should slow down :) @chloe
ReplyDelete@Sam I think that your book review was really good because you were really calm and you spoke at a good pace but I think that you should try to be more fluent :)
ReplyDelete@chloe i like that your review hit all the marks a good book review should have but I think
ReplyDeletethat you just need to snile a bit more
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Delete@sam I liked it because you were very calm and you gave a good description although i think that you could have smiled and showed a bit more facial expression
ReplyDelete@katie I really liked the cliffhanger at the end,just make sure not to rush
ReplyDeleteI think that Chloe's review was BRILLENT and I hope she's Proud of your self
ReplyDeletemy wish is that go SLOW
I think Katie's book review is very good and I like the way she smile.
ReplyDeletemy wish is to slow down.
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Brilliant feedback guys! Remember to explain the reasons behind your 'stars and wishes' so your group mate understands exactly what you mean. I am interested to know if you like seeing your work presented on the blog in this way and how it feels to have your group mates comment on your work? I would love to hear what you think!
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thanks ms mcgrath
Delete@ben you did great work you should be proud my wish would be smile a bit more
ReplyDelete@katie I love the way you left a cliff hanger my wish would just be to slow down a bit more
ReplyDelete@sam Sam you book review was amazing ! My wish would be that u could speak louder a bit more
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ReplyDeleteHi Katie.I watched your book reviews, they were really good.I really liked the way that you kept the review short and simple like the book. Maybe something to improve is to not to pause that much in your reviews ;)
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thank you @wissam
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ReplyDeleteHi Sam. I watched your book reviews, they were good. I really like the way that you gave the right amount information in your reviews. Maybe something to improve on is to speak a little louder ;)
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@Ben
ReplyDeleteHi Ben. I really enjoyed watching your reviews. I really liked the way that you gave a really good summary and you showed a lot of enthusiasam ;)
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Hi Chloe,
ReplyDeleteI thought your review was brilliant and very clear. A star would be that you spoke with enthusiasm and a wish would be that maybe make facial expressions when your talking and maybe smile more đ just be yourself! đ Well done - Kacey
Hey Ben GREAT JOB on your final book review and I like how you read loads of books that represent you @Ben ¬ TENI
ReplyDeleteThanks Teni :)
Delete@ben You gave a really good summary of the book
ReplyDelete@Chloe I loved your book review and how you added a fact. I also liked how you said what the genre was. Now I really want to read the book.
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Hi, @Ben Star:I think you done a brilliant job because you used good vocabulary Star:You where very fluent Star: You used main points without giving to much away Wish:Keep calm and smile :)
ReplyDeleteStar:You where fluent Star:You didn't stumble much Star:You gave an important point especially coming up to Easter for getting dog Easter egg's I love <3 dogs Star: Maybe add one more important point : )
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ReplyDeleteStar:You smiled Star:you where fluent Star: You didn't rush Wish:Mabey don't give too much away : )
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Star:You spoke a little louder Star:You said main points Star:You didn't give too much away Wish:Smile: )
thanks
DeleteHi @Ben, you did a brilliant summary of the book with great vocabulary though my wish for you is to keep calm and smile a bit more - Chiamaka
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