@Sarah I loved your book review and how you flipped through the pages! :) and if you exaggerated your voice a tiny bit more it would be perfect!👍 really good review!
There is great discussion going on in this group! Remember when commenting on the work of others try to explain what you mean so that your group mates can get a better understanding of how they can improve. @Hazel, the way you gave your feedback was an excellent example of this so well done! @Robert, try to elaborate on your comments a little more so that your group mates can benefit fully from your feedback. Keep the discussion going guys and let me know how you feel about having your work presented in this way. I look forward to hearing what you think! MsMcG
@Hazel I really enjoyed your February book review because your spoke clearly and gave a little giggle.The only feedback from me is that you should show your book! Thank you ~Sarah Motac
@chiamaka I liked your book review because you put so much enthusiasm into it and I picked you because I heard your book review in the class and I taught that it would be nice to see how you said it ,so as I said your book review is very good
@Alex T Hi Alex. I watched your book reviews,they were all good. I liked the way that you gave the right amount of information and showed enthusiasm in your videos. Maybe something is to improve on is to not stumble some with words that much;)
Hi Sarah, i watched all of your reviews and every one is brilliant! i liked the way you flipped through the pages and gave a brief summery but maybe smile and make facial expresions more often! Well done! - Kacey :)
@Chiamaka I liked that you included everything that Ms.Mcgrath said to try and put into the review, the only thing is that I think you should slow down a bit and speak more clearly:)
@Hazel I liked the way you started it off like you were on YouTube and you made eye contact! But maybe try use enthusiasm in the future!;) Happy Easter! - Kacey
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ReplyDelete@Alex you were great at making eye contact with the camera👍 but maybe you could show a bit more facial expression :) great review!
ReplyDeleteGreat book review guys☺
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@Hazel you spoke clearly
ReplyDelete@Sarah I loved your book review and how you flipped through the pages! :) and if you exaggerated your voice a tiny bit more it would be perfect!👍 really good review!
ReplyDelete@Alex you stumbled over a few words and it was really good
ReplyDelete@Chiamaka you went to quickly and you spoke clearly
ReplyDelete@Robert thank you so did you :) your great at eye contact👍 but maybe if you spoke abit more fluently it would be even better!
ReplyDelete@Sarah you went quickly and you spoke clearly
ReplyDelete@Chiamaka you spoke abit too fast but aside from that you used great vocabulary and you spoke loudly :)
ReplyDelete@hazel I really like the way you said it like "Hi its hazel " as if you were a youtuber
ReplyDelete@chiamak I really like the way you said "any mood you name them " you were really enthusiastic
ReplyDelete@robert i love your pics Robert and your book review was very good though you kind of struggled a bit,try to speak a bit more fluently
ReplyDelete@sarah I really like your book review because you spoke so fluently and smoothly though you kind of rushed a bit but it was still really good
ReplyDelete@Alex thanks and @Hazel you both had great book reviews and thanks a lot
ReplyDeleteThere is great discussion going on in this group! Remember when commenting on the work of others try to explain what you mean so that your group mates can get a better understanding of how they can improve. @Hazel, the way you gave your feedback was an excellent example of this so well done! @Robert, try to elaborate on your comments a little more so that your group mates can benefit fully from your feedback.
ReplyDeleteKeep the discussion going guys and let me know how you feel about having your work presented in this way. I look forward to hearing what you think!
MsMcG
I like how you spoke fluently and made eye contact but maybe smile and show expression @Sarah -Kacey
ReplyDeleteI liked how you made eye contact and spoke fluently but maybe smile and show expression next time @Sarah ~Kacey
ReplyDelete@Robert I like how you spoke clearly and fluently you did great - Chiamaka
ReplyDelete@Hazel I really enjoyed your February book review because your spoke clearly and gave a little giggle.The only feedback from me is that you should show your book! Thank you
ReplyDelete~Sarah Motac
@Robert I really liked the way you paced yourself and maybe try to keep eye contact with the camera! Thank you!
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@Alex Tse I liked the way you kept eye contact with the camera but maybe try not stutter too much! Thank you!
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@Chiamaka I liked the way you mentioned your favourite part but try to speak a bit slower! Thank you!
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@Alex.T you did very well on your review just try not to stutter so much.
ReplyDeleteThanks chia
Delete@Hazel I really enjoyed your book review because you spoke nice and fluently and had excellent vocabulary ! ~Nina :]
ReplyDelete@Robert I really liked the way you did not give too much away well done ! ~Nina
ReplyDeleteexcellent eye contact @Alex ~ Nina :]
ReplyDeleteI love the way you put in your favourite part you did excellent @Chiamaka ~Nina :]
ReplyDeleteI loved the way you always mad eye contact @Sarah and kept it nice and sweet ! ~Nina :]
ReplyDelete@chiamaka I liked your book review because you put so much enthusiasm into it and I picked you because I heard your book review in the class and I taught that it would be nice to see how you said it ,so as I said your book review is very good
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Thanks @Laura, your book review was brilliant as well. Well done for the irish. Comhghairdeas ! - Chiamaka
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ReplyDeleteHi Alex. I watched your book reviews,they were all good. I liked the way that you gave the right amount of information and showed enthusiasm in your videos. Maybe something is to improve on is to not stumble some with words that much;)
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Hi Sarah,
ReplyDeletei watched all of your reviews and every one is brilliant! i liked the way you flipped through the pages and gave a brief summery but maybe smile and make facial expresions more often! Well done! - Kacey :)
Hi Chiamaka,
ReplyDeleteYour review was brilliant and i liked the way you knew what you were going to say and made brilliant eye contact! Well done! - Kacey :)
@Chiamaka I liked that you included everything that Ms.Mcgrath said to try and put into the review, the only thing is that I think you should slow down a bit and speak more clearly:)
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ReplyDeleteI liked the way you started it off like you were on YouTube and you made eye contact!
But maybe try use enthusiasm in the future!;)
Happy Easter! - Kacey
Happy Easter Everyone! - Kacey
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